First off, I request a do-over; I probably should have done something simpler, but felt that I would be slacking.
Anyhow, I started thinking that the layouts for this project should probably reflect the attitudes of the dragons a bit more, which led to this:
I like the chevron + circular window; it adds a vaguely militaristic feel. I don’t think that letting Wrath break the line of the window (at least not in that way) will work, especially as I had plans for the rim- it’s going to be totally metal with spears and axes and swords and rivets and stuff.
Finally, I probably need to standardize Wrath’s face a bit and figure out exactly how those horns (more specifically, the smaller spikes on them) work. This is another of those angle considerations that I didn’t give enough thought the first time around.